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Well done! A lightning-strike quickie. I love the danger element of being caught. Great story!

Your writing is something that wet dreams are made of. Thank you SO much for your work.

The thrill of getting caught makes this very intriguing along with the nature of the male figure making sure she is loved on a leve most never achieve. At the same time she gives herself to him and him taking what he must value as more than gold. Very well done.