All Comments on 'Behind Closed Doors'

Who's Hermione??

... outruns your writing abilities!

5th from last paragraph - four names.

4th from last paragraph - "The three fell into a heap on the desk all panting and exhausted."

Proof Read and get an Editor!

It's pretty obvious that you stole someone's Harry potter fanfic and changed the names. Too bad you missed a few. Hopefully you will be booted from this site.

For those people who have noticed the error in names in this story I appologise, it wasn't intentional. To the anonymous who called me theif, do your research and at least have the courage to put your name to a criticism. This is an adaptation from a Harry Potter fanfic, one which I wrote myself and can be found on my FanFiction.net account (under the same name). I thought it would be a good place to start this account with. In the future think about things before blindly shouting out your thoughts.

Roman..

Make sure you've double-checked the edit. You've missed changing a DRACO to DAVID and HERMIONE to SEREN (i'm guessing this was once a HP fan fic?)