by RachelTaylor
I thought your story was exciting and very well written. I look forward to more stories from and about Rachel.
possibly the hottest story i've ever read.please give us more.thank you.
Another hot edition. Loved it.Will look for basement. Keep exploits coming.++++
Absolutely loved your story. One of the most exciting stories that I have to got to read. Please keep the stories running in.
One of the hottest I have read here. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Thanks for making it so easy to award these chapters the lowest possible scores. Looking forward to the next chapter which will probably be of the same abysmal quality and will earn the same low scores.
This was a fabulous series! You're a great writer, taking the reader with you on the erotic, exciting sexual ride and making us feel as if we were voyeuristically a part of it.
Whether this is a depiction of a real life event, or your wonderful imagination, you're a very open-minded woman! Kudos to you, and the lucky man who has you in his life.
It must some woman writers obsession to make men weak by humiliating them with their self cuckolding pimping out of their wives to larger cocks so they can watch.
Here you mix physical pain for her into the mix so now we have 2 braindead spouses getting just what you want.
Kind a waste of talent for the so few males into self disrespect don't you think?
annony's coments on here. Barf and sit on your face
Pretty well written, but I won't be reading the continuation.
Pain is definitely not my thing, but unlike the InCels who have left derogatory comments here, I know better than to read stories that I would find disturbing.
Yes, 26thNC, I am looking at you.
Why don't you try your hand at writing erotic stories?
I'll read them and give you an honest opinion about them.