All Comments on 'Being Watched Ch. 01'

by CrystalWill

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago

looking foreward to chapter 2!! very sexy, nice detail while not so detailed that we can't imagine our own details!

Steve OrshonSteve Orshonover 16 years ago
Better than average

I enjoyed this story. A slightly different take on the usual with plenty of opportunity for chapter 2 and beyond. Let us have it Crystal!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Tastfully written...

...Subtle and realistic. I had fun reading it.

Someone in NY

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