All Comments on 'Belar the Mighty: The Lost Sister Ch. 01'

by YummyTiger

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cantfightfatecantfightfateover 15 years ago
Good start.

I enjoyed it.

dupage10dupage10over 15 years ago
A very good start!

Indeed a good start. Initial character descriptions and relationships were started nicely for a first chapter. Looking forward to the rest of the story.

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