by Jayai
What an intriguing story but.... who is she, who is he, outside of what... it is romantic but why?? I hope you write more chapters
on your first story on Lit! It was very well written and leads me to believe to continued your education after high school. Like the first comment I too wonder if this is a standalone story or maybe a series. Either way it works.
So again congrats on your first of I hope many storys to Lit. And thanks for sharing.
just read first 2 paragraphs and immediately gave you 5 stars. 1 for referring to my favorite drummer and 2 for writing like something R. Plant would say. Sorry have to go to sleep(the wife is giving me the evil eye), can not wait to read the rest of the story.Or better I will be dreaming of the side III of the Led Zeppelin IV HA-HA-HA.
This needs more, its that good, and has a sensuality that is seldom seen.
I really enjoyed this, please add to it!
Feel free to turn it into a full length novel ;-)
Please please please please please write another chapter to this, or make it a series or something. I need more! Super hot, very fluent writing, good plot, you are a very good writer and I would absolutely love to read more!