All Comments on 'Beloved Ch. 02'

A little short but great reading and kept my interest. Keep the story line going.

I appreciate all your votes. I would really like some more comments or feedback to let me know how you like or dont like the way the story is going... Thanks

the passion of these characters is amazing! great story. please continue

I'd love some longer chapters. love what you've written so far.

Please continue! Can't wait for Ch.3!!

This is a really good story so far. When will chapter 3 be up? I can't wait to see where you go with these characters.