All Comments on 'Beneath the Stars Ch. 01'

U NEEDED TO START FROM THE START ON HOW SHE WAS TRANSPORTED THERE

I usually don't fall for time jumpers. Good job. As for not knowing how she time jumped, I like the mystery.

The imagery is strong. The characters are, despite the brevity of the chapter, nicely fleshed out. The story draws the reader in swiftly. The sex wasn't overdone since its a story and not just for straight arousal. Well done. I look forward to finding out what happens in Chapter 2.

Plainshoneybadger

Please help us understand how she got where she is. And give us more of everything, including hot sex.

Certainly a well thought out plot and an excellent beginning. Please add a second chapter but do not rush things simply for the sake of getting the next chapter done..

I'm hard at work on the second chapter and I'm so glad everyone seems to be enjoying it thus far. This may go on for quite a bit (perhaps into eBook land?) and while there will be plenty more of the sexy stuff, this story will be, at its core, a love story which -- fair warning -- may prove tragic.

I am from India and stumbled on this story under 'Indian' tag. I should confess, this is a wonderful story with an interesting plot. Good blend of current era thoughts with history. Am very eager to read further, please build on. This story also made me to google more about 'Wasicu' and the 'Lakota' history, interesting perspective it has brought to me. Keep the good work lady. To say the least, lady, you don't sound new to the genre...

I thoroughly enjoyed the historical aspects to your story as well as the character development. I'll be waiting for other additions to this story patiently! I will definitely buy this if it becomes an ebook. Thanks for sharing your talent.

Lady, as some one wrote, writing erotica comes naturally to you. Keep it up and hoping to read more from you.

Looking forward to your comments about my stories, as well.

Thanks

keep it coming! great start!

awesome keep it up please!

loved it, just wish the translations would have been at the beginning.

FairScribe, in your bio you mentioned other erotica you've written, can you tell us where we might find that?

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I'm new to this site and this is my first comment after a month. I resolved not to comment here but I just couldn't help myself! I like reading stories about Native Americans and loved the time travel element you had here and was also so surprised by the level of detail and writing you did! I hope you will continue this! Thank you so much for such a wonderful story!