All Comments on 'Benefits of a Home Office'

Style - Great story. Loved the dialog!!! Loved the sex!!! Loved the slut!!!

Hey Style Guy,

This story was so hot - when you let me read it ahead of posting online, I had to make myself cum! I could imagine myself in Sue's place as she stood there at the SUV, her ass and pussy being assaulted with pleasure in public. I just had to do the same to myself, although here in my bed. *wink* I REALLY hope you take this further.

I love how dominant without being an asshole your characters are.

I liked the story, for the most part. I liked the scene at and inside Sue's car, and at her house. You write pretty good sex scenes.

At first, I thought the guy's discretion about not sharing details of his sex life with his wife was out of respect for his wife and their relationship. When he commenced the affair with Sue without any regard for his wife—not telling her of his desire or plan to play Dom to Sue, including fucking her, or having a conversation with his wife—I lost respect for him. He became another dishonest, deceptive and betraying spouse.

Because of your skillful writing, dialogue, and sex scenes, I gave the story a 4.

I agree with northbaybear. If he was a real dom, he would have informed his wife by simply telling her. As his sub, she would have known exactly how to behave. I suspect that the author has more up his sleeve for this guy and his two women. Kind of looking forward to that.

Brilliant slow build up and a crackerjack hot story. Well done!

Sorry but as a Dom in a committed relationship he would have at least infrormed his wife first. He wouldn't have "laid down the law" as a Dom to his sub, that's not how those relationships go. In any relationship their is trust and respect, even more so in a DOM/SUB relationship. Him having this secret Sub is violating the very essence of that type of arrangement.

She was ripe for bendable surrender to the right, benevolent dominator. Very well told. Full marks.*****

I hope there is more to cum!!

Instead of saying.... ( "let's plan our second romp tomorrow!" ) , he should have said "You can expect to start planning our FUTURE tomorrow."

5 stars

If you're going to play BDSM or fetish games at least do the readers the courtesy of posting this garbage in the right place. This isn't a LW story and you know it.

1 star

Long time since I read such a load of crap.Kept on reading to the ,hoping it would get better,more fool me.

Hard-on story with great release! LOL