All Comments on 'Beowulf Ch. 01'

by claretwine

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Oooo, I like It!

Oooo claretwine, this is a good story. I like the way you intermingle suspense with sex, it turns me on. Your descriptions are superb. Great job and keep it up, I can't wait for the continuation.

Sally in CA

SatansCandySatansCandyalmost 18 years ago
Your agent sounds more

like a spoiled school girl who needs to grow up. Sorry, couldn't get past her pouting with her superior.

hornyinwvhornyinwvalmost 18 years ago
Pretty interesting beginning

makes me wonder who the man is. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.

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