by BluMoonChild
Your writing is really improving. I thought you had a lot of talent, and you are proving it. That was exceptionally well done.
Because jeez that was Hotttt! 5 stars
It does my heart good. I've got a big old cheesy grin on my face. :D
I don't know how they go about deciding which stories receive an "H" and which stories don't, but the fact that you thought BCS was worth it is good enough for me. Thank you.
Thank you. It's great to be back. I was a little lost for a while. I'm improving? Hurray for that! There's always room for improvement.
Very, very well done? Exceptional. Almost flawless? I'll take that to the bank! Thank you, both.
Anonymous,
Thanks for giving me the low down on how they decide "H" stories. You didn't leave an email address, so this was the only way I could respond. Yeah, yeah, I know. That's what "anonymous" means, but thanks just the same.
I really enjoyed the imagery you produced and your attentiveness to detail. That is what sets this apart from similar stories. 5 stars for sure, but I think you can do even better.
Definitely adding you as a favorite to bookmark your earlier work for later and look forward to more new writing..
Very well written story. "they were a mass of weak and sweaty flesh". This is my first time adding a comment...love your writing style. One of my faves for sure.
Very hot and realistic. It took me back to a few escapades I have played out myself. Made me wonder if your story had some basis of truth behind it. Thanks for sharing!