All Comments on 'Best Friend'

Your grammar is really lacking. Makes no sense and really takes away from your story. Get some people to proof read for future reference..

Difficult to read, but I suffered through it. Some translated phrases surprised me. "My body escaped my will." was easy to understand. But please find someone (a real person) who know English well. You would get much higher ratings. I'll give a 4/5 for an attempt.