All Comments on 'Best Friend's Brother'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Very nice, please give us more of these 3. Yes Jay needs to catch ten at it and join in. Talk about hot!!

SilverSilhouetteSilverSilhouetteabout 10 years ago
Gr8!

You've done very well with the charaterizations and the procession of the story....

Its really gr8 and i feel it has the potential to be something greater if u continue to add more! Please keep it up! ^^

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Fell Off A Cliff

The climax was anticlimactic, if that makes sense. Got me hard but ended too quickly!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Part two

Can I make a part two when scott and him meet up for some more fun

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