by Serinitee
Very, very good start. I see good things ahead for a talented writer.
Great story I hope you continue it. I can't wait and see what happens?
I can't believe you stopped there. Very interesting & hot. I hope you continue & update often.
Nice start
What a great story! And SOOOOOOOOOOOOO HOT! OMG! Dont think I was prepared to get this heated up when I first clicked on this story! LOVE your writing and the characters. Great story! Cannot wait for the next part! WOW!
WOW!!! great introduction, great everything! i was so into it that i got mad when it ended like that! keep us updated! cant wait for the next chapter.
Thank you all for your positive feedback! I'm so happy that you enjoyed it! I am very competitive :) so I encourage you all to vote! Hope you all are looking forward to what's going to happen next with Bryan and Jae! Thanks!
WOW! You are a very talented writer and I'm totally vested to see what happens with these characters. Hurry up with the next chapter, please!
Great job, Serinitee! Bryan and Jae were written so well, and I'm excited to see where this story goes. Something tells me Keith isn't done yet, lol...and I can't wait to see Bryan put him in his place. I love their friendship, and I can't believe you left us hanging like that either! Update...and soon b/c this bunch will sick the hounds on you for making them wait, lol. Great job, missy!---Soular
This is very nice, especially for a first story. I anxiously await more. I also like that it is an innterracial story that isn't all about the stereotypes of big cocks and degrading everyone else. Nice job!
I really loved this story. Thank you for not making the different races the main focus of the story like some authors do, imho. You captured the beauty of the physical differences without losing the relationship.
This is my favorite story/series on here. I absolutely love it!! Great work :)
I know it's anal considering it's the same name, but is it Brian or Bryan?