All Comments on 'Best Friends Ch. 01'

by Serinitee

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Love it!

Please continue. Good story can't wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Excellent

Very, very good start. I see good things ahead for a talented writer.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Great

Great story I hope you continue it. I can't wait and see what happens?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Can't Believe

I can't believe you stopped there. Very interesting & hot. I hope you continue & update often.

Nice start

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
HOLY CRAP

What a great story! And SOOOOOOOOOOOOO HOT! OMG! Dont think I was prepared to get this heated up when I first clicked on this story! LOVE your writing and the characters. Great story! Cannot wait for the next part! WOW!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
OMFG

WOW!!! great introduction, great everything! i was so into it that i got mad when it ended like that! keep us updated! cant wait for the next chapter.

SeriniteeSeriniteealmost 15 years agoAuthor
"Best Friends"

Thank you all for your positive feedback! I'm so happy that you enjoyed it! I am very competitive :) so I encourage you all to vote! Hope you all are looking forward to what's going to happen next with Bryan and Jae! Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
You tease!

You'd better finish this story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Please write more...

and soon! This is great so far.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
HOT

WOW! You are a very talented writer and I'm totally vested to see what happens with these characters. Hurry up with the next chapter, please!

soularsoularalmost 15 years ago
Nice job!! So hot...

Great job, Serinitee! Bryan and Jae were written so well, and I'm excited to see where this story goes. Something tells me Keith isn't done yet, lol...and I can't wait to see Bryan put him in his place. I love their friendship, and I can't believe you left us hanging like that either! Update...and soon b/c this bunch will sick the hounds on you for making them wait, lol. Great job, missy!---Soular

Candy9Candy9almost 15 years ago
Very good.

This is very nice, especially for a first story. I anxiously await more. I also like that it is an innterracial story that isn't all about the stereotypes of big cocks and degrading everyone else. Nice job!

fiammettafiammettaalmost 15 years ago
Awesome!

I really loved this story. Thank you for not making the different races the main focus of the story like some authors do, imho. You captured the beauty of the physical differences without losing the relationship.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
WOW!

That was HOT!!! I can't wait to read the rest.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
My favorite story

This is my favorite story/series on here. I absolutely love it!! Great work :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Pick a spelling please!!!

I know it's anal considering it's the same name, but is it Brian or Bryan?

JackMozJackMozabout 8 years ago
Great start!

Great start to what I hope will be a great story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Whooo damn

It has intense potential!!

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