by Peter Duncan
I enjoyed your story very much.Needless to say, you must continue.
You just have to let Lee get Mary,and let her be tell how good he is..........
...there's a continuity error between chapter one, where hubby is nice and considerate and treats her like a princess, and always makes sure she has at least one orgasm, and then in chapter two, where suddenly he's a selfish jerk and never makes her cum.
and the two son's names got mixed up at the end of chapter one, also.
your editor should have caught those. :(