All Comments on 'Best Friends Ch. 02'

great efort,

Will be readund the next ch

...there's a continuity error between chapter one, where hubby is nice and considerate and treats her like a princess, and always makes sure she has at least one orgasm, and then in chapter two, where suddenly he's a selfish jerk and never makes her cum.

and the two son's names got mixed up at the end of chapter one, also.

your editor should have caught those. :(

You just have to let Lee get Mary,and let her be tell how good he is..........

I enjoyed your story very much.Needless to say, you must continue.