All Comments on 'Better Friends'

by robertreams

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William smythWilliam smythabout 12 years ago
Unexpected

I was expecting to see a long delayed continuation of the saga of Mickey and Lance but this pair of interesting characters are every bit as good. It's good to see this writer back with a 5 Star.offering. Keep it going this time.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

Very HOT story !! I hope you right a second chapter soon and let Jack and Mike open up and explorer all kinds of things together. Thanks for the story !!

William smythWilliam smythabout 11 years ago
This is it!

This could serve as a lesson for all would-be writers.

This is an example of what good honest pornographic fiction should be.

Beautifully descriptive and with totally realistic dialog in a well developed story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
confused

who the hell is Jack? the previous two chapters had mickey and lance and they had sex. this one has two old "gay virgins" this seems more of a stand alone than a continuation of the previous two chapters.

robertreamsrobertreamsover 10 years agoAuthor
OOPS

This story was not intended to be a part of the previous series. I had it entitled Best Friends II. as opposed to 2. Wen I submitted, they said I already had a 2 and 3 so, without thinking I made it 4.

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