All Comments on 'Best Intentions Ch. 01'

Definitely worth a part 2, 3 or more!

title says it all

HELL YES MORE!!!

Wonderful writing. You treated the subject with respect and a tenderness that is not ordinarily seen. You have also set the stage for several other stories, You and him together, anal sex, sex with a woman, him watching, him even joining in with the two of you.

A very well though out story. Keep up the good work.

Loved it and can't wait for the next chapter. Great writing.

Really really good in the next chapter can you keep

it as real or believable as in this chapter thats what

makes this story so good

teach him how to eat pussy. I cam so hard when he shot his lod into your mouth. Then masturate him and suck him as you train him not to cum so quickly. Make him your young trainee, and please let him use his 8 inch cock to satisfy your holes, all of them. Let him fuck you as he is training. The best think a mother can do for her boy is to make him a great lover. and it's good for mom too! I know! Continue and do it quiclkly I need to cum again reading your work it's the best!!

If any story is worthy of another chapter, this one is. I am not going to try to tell you what or how to write, but will watch for it. I think you know what your fans want...

the best read i've had for a while! pls continue!

regards and thank u for the story.

Fabulous.

Your story held attention from start to finish. Please continue with the next chapter.

Please send us the next chapter of such a well written, original story.

THANK YOU

awesome story please write part 2. can not wait to read part 2.

And like someone else said"Keep it as real and believable as this chapter was".

The story had its flaws (I think it developed a little too fast) but it certainly deserves a continuation. I'm waiting to read it. Nice work! ^__^

WoW! I love the way you described the gradual opening up of the mother to her son - pun intended :) I think I echo the sentiments of so many other readers in saying, I wait with bated breath for the subsequent parts (why stop with part 2?)

Venus

I may get irate if there isn' another part........ just kidding........a good seed is planted, let it bare fruit............Pat

Excellent writing and story. Can't wait for more

A wonderful story, skillfully written and perfectly paced. REALLY hope you continue contributing. Much enjoyed and a big thanks.

Looking forward to the rest.

Great start looking forward to more. Very hot

He still hasn't fucked her yet, or told her that he is in love with her.

I hope that there's still a lot in the mind of the author yet to entertain us with.

As with all of RainierWriter's work, it's always good to read.

Thanks

Excellent I like that type of story,erotic and sensual

I rated it 4 fingers. I was so turned on by your erotic writing.

I'm not sure that I agree with some of the other comments, about asking for more.

One of the first rules in writing suspenseful erotica is ..........

wait a moment, I'm busy right now, but I'll tell you about it in another comment.

I enjoyed the introduction and anticipation. You have opened some interesting future options such as with Deb, daughter, and sex with the mother.

Part 1 was very hot. Please continue...

YOU ALWAYS LEAVE US WANTING MORE. AND DARREN IS A BIT OF A LATE BLOOMER. IT WILL BE HOT FUN TO KNOW HOW HE MATURES AND TAKES MATTERS INTO HIS OWN HANDS. CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE COCK SUCKING AND FUCKING FUN. MAKES ME FEEL REALLY GOOD IF YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN. ;-)

I love it. I can't wait to read the next part. I like when the sexual tension grows up slowly.

The fact that she first says "no" makes it more realistic. She knows that it is wrong but she is willing to do it to save her relationship with her son.

Lucky for us, she finds the experiment very exciting and agrees to do it again.

The story is great. Keep writting.

More! Very good. This story builds slowly and the end leaves me wondering "where do they go from here?"

MORE MORE MORE

Wonderfully written and exceptionally hot. Since you solicited opinions about whether to write a part II here's my 2 cents worth: Mom and Darren continue to fully explore each other, then enter sis or mom's friend. As a writer you have the skill and and imagination to pull it off magnificently, as evident by this and all your other stories. Thanks for your effort.

wow..great stuff.

more please :)

Well written. I like where you are going with this. Preggers?

u have to write more!

Fantastic story and tease Can't wait for the next chapter please hurry.

cannot wait for part two take it slow her tease is best part

Very good, yes a second part is needed and hurry!

L.A.Wicker.

Does Jan give in to Debbie?

Dose Jan bring Debbie in to help with Darren's sex education?

Does Jan agree to help Darrens best friend that has a huge cock?

Were the boy's shy because they were turned down by girls early on because they had huge cock's?

We are waiting with bated breath's this is to hot to let drop now.

Hurry up will you.

That was very good I hope you write the second chapter soon.

Definitely continue and don't rush to a conclusion. I hope mom is pregnant at the end.

can't wait for the next chapter

Excellent story, please continue as soon as possible!!! Can't wait!!!

Wonderfully-paced story. Excited about pt. II.

one of the best storys i have read please write part 2 as soon as you can

Well written, don't stop now.

OMG!! I am so hard..was reading this on my phone at work and cant get up from my desk. Please write more!

It was a really hot story, that's for sure. I'm heading for chapter 2 already! Nice work! ^__^

This story is really hot!! It's the second time I've read it. Can't wait for more, please continue writing it.

Very well written, but one minor point: "prone" means lying face down.

Like it alot, but I hope you wont bring Deb into it all... She tried to take advantage of her in a distraught moment faking helping her, and if a guy had done it he would have been known as a douche, same goes for women...

Oh and daintydavy, as far as I know prone also means inclined to... As in "I'm prone to correct you if you are wrong". :)

Is it worthy of a part two? Hell yes, and a part 3 an 4.. Mom needs to express her bi tendencies with Deb.. As well as show her son the delights of a threesome..Wasn't there a doctor mentioned earlier on... You are a great writer, you know the drill...

RWII.......I am going to have to say that you have my attention, and my honey pot boiling over very nicely so far. I lost count of my multible hot and juicey orgasms, but then again, whos counting? Very well done indeed!! ;-)

Thanks for sending me the invite.

EB

Mom needs to get over herself and fuck her son with his BIG dick and invite him to stay in her bed whenever possible! Hell yes!! Continue this story for a lot more than one chapter!! Your buildup to their orgasms are outstanding. I've read some of your other stories so far and their gggreat; and I will read everything you write! My favorite is the marine fucking his mom and sister incognito at Halloween! That story needs way more chapters!!!

mom just has to let her boy do what he's dying to do--stick his prick up her mommy-hole and blow his young balls up the same cunt he came out of. I like the comment of a previous writer. It's time for he boy to fuck a baby up his own mother's twat. That'll give the young motherfucker the calm poise and self-confidence--and supreme boyish pride--that can only come from knowing his potent young balls have knocked up dear old mom.

it's worthy of more than just 1 more chapter, please see this to a wonderful and mutually exciting climax for readers and characters ;)

Momma Jan has found herself a mid-life boytoy, who just happens to live under the same roof as her, available anytime she and he are under the same roof at the same time--but hey, her sex object plaything just happens to be her son!!

Jan is in the perfect profession. Being a nurse her whole career is clinical. It's amazing her whole attitude about her son, including her son's presence to aid her in her reaching her sexual satisfactions, is even more clinical than her job!! She never showed him any considerations his whole life until she recently considered him to be available for her sexual pleasures. She has no more love for him now--other than her concern for his genital equipment for her perusal--than before she began her games with him. Every word said to him in the course of sex has led to the embarrassment of him; each conversation with him has been to taunt and tease him!! And she has as much as said for him to be available for her beck and call.

Jan's deviancy has her considering a lesbian lover for sating her urges, even to the point of initiating one session and a second time of teasing her probable lesbian partner. For the use of her son's cock her only consideration is for him--even for his first sexual carnal copulation of his life, an incestual consummation with his mother at that--is to use his dick to give her a shit-funnel an enema!! When she went through the line to build her womanly attributes, she failed to pickup her DNA genes for motherly understanding and love.

Don't misunderstand me. I love the story! It is great writing, clearly, precisely and well constructed and nicely presented. The mother character is very nicely role played, animated and lively. The dialogue for Darren is minimal at best; however his mother is quite vocal, very well spoken, even educationally. The theme and plot are good.

The literary aspects are well developed, nicely done throughout, all with minimal flaws. The only problem with this story, at least thus far into their affair, is that it incorporates carnal incest of a son being seduced by his mother--a mother that should not have ever had a son!!!

fap fap fap......

I would like to know if he get it on with his MOM '!!!!!!!

Loved the slow seduction of her son. Can't wait to read chapter 2. A 5* story, RW. Thanks.

it's worthy

it was awesome...but the story you did on Sandra was better, think you can do some more stuff like that?

thanks!

This is worthy of a Part IV if you have the imagination to take it that far. A great story.

Very well written. A warm loving story with no crudities. A mother who wants to do the best for her teenage boy when in a venerable state. Not saying she didn't enjoy it as it progressed and the boundaries were broken.

Know you have written a sequel so will read it now.

REgards

I'm glad she rejected that stupid dyke friend of her stupid dykes always tring to rape straights and making them bitch dykes like them

Enjoyed reading the story very much!!!

yes it is worthy of a part two.......

Well worth more please

Your description of the scene was erotic from the beginning.

I first read this gloriously sexy story a couple of years ago and found it as arousing again now as I did then. Looking forward to reading more from you.

A pussy is NOT a vagina or a cervix both are equally wrong. Anal? NO! I'm not gay. Shaved pussy??? Why would a woman want to look like a little kid? Otherwise well written great story.

A year later and another sexy read. Thank you.

More please!!

Hell YES ITS WORTHY!! awesome job so far..🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Beautiful story. Completely believable and very, very erotic!

Awesome waiting on the sex 5stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I liked the story. The author knows how to construct and logically develop an apparently norrmal relationship between a mother and son. Likewise, I appreciate the author's use of the English language. So far he has resisted reverting to the use of gutter language. As to the characters, it is obvious that mother and son never talked. As a mother and a nurse, she could not/can not give up her position of authority and recognize and accept her son as a male sexual being (unfortunately fiction reflects real life). Finally, she has no reason to feel shame or guilt in her actions. For all her knowledge and life experience, She can not understant that love has no boundaries, limits nor rerservations; only small minded, insecure self-image humans with fragile self egos and ids fail to recognize or accept the idea of unrestriced love.

Nicely done. Looking forward to reading the sequel.

Wow!