All Comments on 'Best Man'

Nothing feels much better to me than to slowly enter my girlfriend after she's been filled with cum. It makes her really horny too!

Not a bad read. You're correct. It could use a bit of polishing. For me, the orchestration was a bit awkward, a bit rushed. Worth reading, though.

Thank you for taking the time to read this and for the feedback! To be perfectly honest, I became rather excited writing this. Admittedly, it is difficult for me to concentrate when my heart is pounding and arousal takes the place of intelligence! I've been to this site a number of times over the years, and I was anxious to finally have some material to submit of my own.

I'll slow down on my next story and work on the pacing. Perhaps I'll even let it "cool" off for a few days, then come back to it for editing.

Did that to my wife more than once. We both of it. Good story