All Comments on 'Beth Finds Magic'

All I can say is Wow, that is a fantastically sexy story. I loved being inside Beth's mind as she played with the magic wand and remembered her encounter with her friend. You perfectly describe Beth's mixture of embarassment, excitement, and pure pleasure. What a blend! You are a gifted writer. Keep up the great work. I'd give this an A plus!

I would have enjoyed the story more, and it would have seemed more realistic, if there had been a bit more background on why Cindy felt she could be so overtly sexual with Beth. Perhaps the two were ready for such in your face (literally) activity, but I didn't understand that. Otherwise, good job.