by bthom
As with the first one, very erotic and excellently written. I look forward to more.
Extremely well written and wonderfully descriptive. I love how slow you are moving. Hope to see many more decadent chapters.
You have created a nice story here. Great job describing both characters and bringing their desires together into a mutually satisfying arrangement. Thanks.
I guess we aren't going to get to read the third chapter after this long. Too bad, things were just getting to rock. Enjoyed the story and was hoping for more so we could see what else Beth had in store for her panty man.
Too bad for Dad! Old guy got put in place by his young son. Good story with some hot sex. It was nice how it played out,