All Comments on 'Betrayal 06'

now LR users are finally caught up with what was posted 4~ weeks ago on another story site! guess we get the 10 day gap for being the bastard site!

There was more than this posted on Lit before he took it down and started over, so we're still not caught up.

Please keep writing...and what other site is this posted on?

This is amazing!! You are an amazing writer and have captured by attention with this amazing story. Thank you so much for sharing it with all of us.

The plot thickens...his best friend is a traitor too?

What other site has pinched this story as I'm not sure NTV knows about it yet! He had this story posted here for months and took it down to re-write it and is now reposting. As far as I know he has no other site so if it is there it is stolen!

I did have it posted on another site, but have since taken it down. It's only on here now. To my knowledge it hasn't been stolen. I try to do spot checks every now and then since the original got a chapter or two stolen.

I have caught some of the changes from this and the older one. I do like the way this version flows. Looking forward to the rest of the series and the possible side stories that might turn into full-blown series like this on.

Wanderingaimlessly

please post more soon!

Just wish it were coming in bigger chunks.

I must have missed this one the first time you had it posted but I'm really enjoying what you have up so far. How many chapters were up before?

The suspense is building! I have noticed subtle and small differences which I believe will make this story so much better! I appreciate how quickly you update (although you deserve a break sometime too:)) I cannot wait to see how this story continues to develop.

This story is pure pleasure to read.

Very enjoyable to read- love the old-world feel set in outer space. Can't wait for more! Mykal is an interesting character, and the dramatic tension is perfect.

NTV mannn u r just great ....... pls pls pls post the next chapter fasr..... been w8ing fir yhe past 4 days .......