All Comments on 'Betrayal'

by sddcfreak

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
trouble wasn't over sissyboy

she fucked others in your own bed,that disrespectful.there no trust between the two of you now.is it a mama thing you still there or you like to see who can out do who.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Interesting but trust is now the issue.

Both made mistakes, and it is doubtful that she was ever going to tell him about it. The trust is gone and they should have an open marriage or divorce. In reality, he should have been tested and so should she before either of them get involved again. Sad but realistic. Once cheater(s, always cheater(s). Greg

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Terrible.

The idea of getting even for cheating by cheating is so ridiculous that it doesn't even fit in fiction. If you want to write a cuckold story (and you do, given the "durr, do I still love her, despite just watching her get tag-teamed? I sure do!"), just do a straightforward cheating wife story and be done with it. Trying to justify it with silliness of this or any other kind is doubly insulting to the audience.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
plain stupid

end of marriage, end of story

roadbirdroadbirdover 16 years ago
i wonder

can they trust each other again...he cdame home sick to find this...he told her what he did ..he saw what she did...im not sure i could ever get over her doing things she had never did with me...im not sure i would want to touch her again without her being tested before to make sure she didnt pick up a disease...maybe he needed to be tested also ...but if i had known the guys i would never be able to face them again without tossing them down a set of stairs...id forever hear what they said and my wife said ...in some way id have to get revenge on them...if possible he should have taken digital pics of them and sent it to their wives if they were married ...maybe their wives would want revenge also so maybe their wives would then put them through what mine had done..his wife couldnt conplain about him doing that after all he still didnt fuck others....i think they needed some pain also ..so yes definitely their wives sshould find out ...if they got pissed at his wife for me her hubby telling their wives they shouldnt have been fucking around in the first place ...i dont know i just know id have a very hard time trusting her again...maybe id just ass fuck her from now on ...maybe because they didnt do that i could ass fuck my wife and be ok with that ...maybe shell like sucking his cock after hes fucked her ass also ..that would be a cool way to show hy=ubby that she loves him enough to only let him fuck her ass and then suck his cock clean ...maybe in time he could then maybe fuck her pussy some also as hes ass fucking her ...if it was my wife i think that would be a nice solution... at least till we could trust each other again

Harryin VAHarryin VAover 16 years ago

this is sick super wimp joke right?

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>i>Suddenly, the only question in my mind was, "Did I still want to be with her?" The answer was undoubtedly, yes

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Huh? why?

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ignoring the problems of two wrongs NOT making a right... How is fucking two men without a condom and anal fucking in the couples own bed getting even?

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strippng the sheets is the answer?

Alvaron53Alvaron53over 16 years ago
Nope

I have to agree with Harry: how do two wrongs make a right? Both of these people will pursue some strange tail if it strikes their fancy so why are they married? Fidelity is a hindrance to them gratifying their baser desires. They should get a divorce and be free to shack up with whomever they like. <P>

Insofar as the story goes, it's average in the storytelling. The characters are reasonably described, the plot is uncomplicated, and there's definitely conflict but the resolution of that conflict rings hollow. Once trust is destroyed, the marriage is irrevocably damaged.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
sick story

Two adulterous married asses who deserve each other . As one of your readers asked,"Why did they get married?".Get divorced and screw anyone you want.

the Ct. Yankee

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
even....

....w/ open marriage, this situation is unacceptable. just who are those guys? what if one of them are unstable? and stupidity is never erotic.

JADED_ONE1969JADED_ONE1969over 16 years ago
Enough ...

I like the idea that's where the liking stops yes in many cheating wife stories one or other spouse gets their own back and they both have to deal with it but as others have said two wrongs do not make right or is that two for her and one for him which kind of makes an inbalance. Sorry but unless they have some serious therapy this marriage is doomed.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Hardly Arousing - Just Sickly Sad 4 the End

Quite well written but to what point and for whom? <P>

He is a cheating Asshole and she double cucked him in his bed with more to come if she thinks she should or wants to.<P>

Hardly erotic - just a downer sliding south without any one to relate to.<P>

You can do better as on this one you know she fried her own ass - yet you turned the helpless wimp for her to cuck again.<P>

Hardly fair.

zed0zed0over 16 years ago
Looooser

A jerk, A Cuck, AND a Wimp! 3 time looser.

GagelessGagelessabout 16 years ago
dont listen to the jerks

I love the LOSERS who make nasty comments because they dont agree with the topic. Go read another story, fuckholes.

Actually, I reckon most of them loved it, and are ashamed at themselves. haha prudes.

Good story, good fantasy.

Adequately written and enjoyable.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
I would never betray her again

You dont have to betray her, you gave her a get out of jail free card by saying nothing. You are a fool. She took cum into her mouth from two men. You are an ass, she had at risk sex, condoms on the floor or not. She is at risk for a large number of diseases and STDs due to oral sex stupid. Tell her you two are even, and the lawyer will be in contact with her for the divorce papers. Gather your clothes and leave. What she has done once she will again, and after all those emails, now you have to wonder at how many she has been to bed with, and how many in the future she will be with. You confessed to her, she committed adultry on you but without your consent. You confessed, she swallowed.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
a god dam fool

why bring this shit too this site.wimp ass sissyboy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
What a fucking stupid story and wimp husband!

OMG - quit writing this dog shit.

AcalAcalabout 15 years ago
Amazed

It amazes me how many retards take fiction as actual fact. Really well written I gave you 5 stars. My policy is I just delete the jackass comments they're a waste of space. But there is one thing you have to accept though on Literotica there is a lot of offensive jackasses. This place is a haven for trolls considering its so large. Best way to deal with it is to delete and ignore

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

this sucked, i'm so tired of the man either getting destoryed or is a pussy who tells the truth and his wife fucks everybody in site for revenge and yet he manages to stay with .BS

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Christ, when the hell will you posters grow up???

Where do you live? Don't you have neighbors? friends? work buddies? don't you KNOW any humans??? PEOPLE DON'T FUCKING BEHAVE LIKE THIS ANYWHERE ON THIS PLANET! You don't go from a wanton fucking whore making degrading comments about your life mate to 30 seconds later being loving, crying, and sorry! That person would have to be completely mentally unstable! Which is why YOU sddcfreak, have never met anyone who behaves this way. I read something like this crap, and I feel like it was written by an extremely inexperienced teenager.

CyberSearcherCyberSearcherabout 13 years ago
More information, please

I found this story believeable, although how her tryst and his coming home early does stretch the idea of coincidence and perfect timing. I want to know how each really felt at the time she realized he was home and when she saw the sword in his hand, as I do not recall him doing anything with it, so he must have still held it. I would like to have heard about her fantasy, why she did have them use condoms, and explain how it was just sex. They did both seem sorry and she did not laugh in his face when she entered the room.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
BS

she met your bid and raised you two

only realistic call is both of you lose and divorce to much history to get off and she raised the HIV/STD chance to over 300%

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

CUCK CUCK CUCK CHICKEN SHIT WIMP

GoodhueGoodhueabout 9 years ago
WIMP!

Have you no self respect,asshole? Dump the cunt!

DrKenStoneDrKenStonealmost 9 years ago
Tell her she wins...Then boot her ass. Dumb Shit!

Tell her she wins...Then boot her ass. Dumb Shit!

PolyLvrPolyLvralmost 9 years ago
Heh.

No comment about his cheating. Only hers.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Just a couple of cheaters.

With no self respect or pride. And probably some STD's added to the mix. Just get the divorce that's coming. At the end, since he's so sick, did he puke on her? Terrible story.

sinsational83sinsational83almost 9 years ago
Not bad

Hubby needs to get his shit together and kick her ass to the curb. Hell he can't possibly think he can sexually please her since she had her threesome. She will be looking to do it again behind his back like she tried to do this time. He needs to get even with the nosey bitch that ratted him out to his wife. Besides he was drinking, and did it with one woman, one time she did it cold sober, and, she had done it with two guys and what that's suppose to be even. yup he needs to kick her ass out.

sinsational83sinsational83almost 9 years ago
forgot this

As far as the story goes, it really wasn't too bad. It was really well written.

VapspegeoVapspegeoalmost 8 years ago
Well Written

You write well and there is Betrayal in this story but, shouldn't it be a cuckhold story Or, two stupid people who should not be together, or simply why even bother being near each other or, I don't like you very

much #itch or what the hell I didn't like this story. You do write well even the sentences are complete.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

any cuck or wimp just ruins a good story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
I Am sure There Are Many Who Enjoyed Tgis

But I am not one. When I walked in on my wife engaged in a gangbang, I left her, never to return. I did not try to get revenge sex.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
A typically cuckold/wimp crap!!!

More idiocy isnt possible!!! Two wrongs do not make a right. Divorce the slut and go on with a happy life. But that author wouldnt allow that. He is in his pervert cuckold/wimp fantasies trapped!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
You got two star's by accident

My finger slipped- you were supposed to get one star. This story sucked

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Worst storry

Damn it sucks poor writing

jimjam69jimjam69over 4 years ago
Okay

At best a doomed marriage.

jimjam69jimjam69about 3 years ago

Still doomed marriage. Just set her up with a 3some + 3some + 3some all at one time then walk out the door saying have fun and good bye!

Stuart1996Stuart1996over 2 years ago

Whoever forgives a cheater is a fucking piece of garbage

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

A very sad shit story. Zero stars

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