by Cromagnonman
I loved everything about this story. It's nice to see women who find beauty in themselves.
I can't wait to read the next two chapters, and if something terribly sinister was to happen, that would be entertaining as well.
A very apropos bad priest ;-)
Interesting first chapter I love the storyline. Good read. Thanks for sharing.
Can't wait to see what depravity Daddy comes up with. I could see him trying to,rape her to punish her for falling from his religious grace.
I love putting the pin in over stuffed hypocritical wind bags -
I gotta agree with the commentator's acclaim for the clever weaving of this tale by Cromagnonman.
Congrats from Anthropophagicman
He must have a fascinating internal dialogue. I can see where he was transferring guilt to his wife and daughter to relieve his inner turmoil!
You should consider a follow-up to tell how everything . Changed for everyone Mom,Dad, Mr Andrew, Ms Cecilia & esp. Ruth
This screams for the next chapter. Well written in every way. Flow between narrative and dialogue was smooth, story development increased in interest as it progressed, with the end moving rapidly to the climax. Good stuff.
I liked the read. Interesting story, interesting girl. I'd like to see a sequel to this.