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Sam went over and unlocked the cage and threw a blanket on the concrete floor. They undid her arms and legs; Angela sat and looked up at them. She could see the anger still in both their faces; like a mirror.
"Crawl slut," ordered Mike. "That's your home from now on. Crawl like the filthy animal you are before I get down a whip."
Angela tenderly got on her hands and knees feeling the welts covering her legs. She crawled into the cage and on to the blanket. Mike placed a stainless steel bowl in her cage. He grabbed a garden hose and filled it half full. She hung her head, but snapped it back up at the sound. Mike was peeing into the bowl.
"I expect that water to be drunk by the time we return. The only water I could drink my first day was from the toilet. You'll experience all I had to and much more slut."
They both left and secured the door. Sam turned to his brother and hugged him to his chest with tears in his eyes. He was sure he was going to find out more as the days progressed about Mike's ordeal, but he was happy that Mike now had an outlet to get it all out and behind him. This slut would serve their purpose and then probably be sold overseas. He'll wait; it would be Mike's call.
"Let's go have some dinner and do some planning. I'm going to assume that at some point you'd like her nipples pierced for weights. I'll show you all the possibilities including a whole line along her tongue in case you want her to give you a blowjob again. It'll intensify the feeling along the underneath side of your cock," said Sam as he released Mike from the hug. They both walked back to go upstairs; much planning to be done.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoThat would be perfect. This was terrible. Even the cat in your Bio seems pissed.
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoHe didn't die in jail. He certainly belonged there or in the cemetery.
Anonymousover 16 years agoAPPLAUSE!!!
I've been in this lifestyle since I was Legal. I have wanted to do this to a slave that ran on Me! (After having Her Mistress interrogated.) Fantastic work! Hoping for another chapter!
Alvaron53over 16 years agoShould've been filed under Nonconsent/Reluctance because this is a story of abuse, not BDSM. The prose has some problems with grammar and syntax. Get an editor to help. The dialog is too stilted. Nobody talks like that except in bad porno flicks on Cinemax late at night.
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As a work of fiction, kudos to the author because the story does have a plot, a central conflict through which the characters move toward a resolution. I didn't find the scenes particularly erotic since I'm not into abuse and humiliation but that doesn't detract from the literary aspect of the storytelling.
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The characters were out of kilter. How Michael never mentioned his twin brother to his sub is rather too fantastic to be believable. And the whole supersecret house out in the country where nobody will observe them doing their nefarious deeds smacks of bad action movies. Sheesh, give me a real dominant in a credible relationship with his sub any time.
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In the end, I have to rate the story as so-so. I thank you for your effort.
Marines_Lady_15over 16 years agoit's under the right category, and if people don't like it then they don't need to read it. I thought it was great! It was well written, and pulled you in while you read.
I personally can't wait to read the next chapter. There will be another chapter right??
