All Comments on 'Betrayed Ch. 04'

I am so enamoured with your descriptions and your writing. You put a lot of yourself into your stories, that's obvious. Keep going darling and never, ever change...

or it seems, through the looking glass into this mad, mad world.

it is like one extended hallucination. lets see if i have an understanding of the plot:

-a straight (seeming) husband has his wife run off with an ex-sports star, said star turns out to be attracted to transvestite/transexual prostitutes.

-the straight husband goes out the club, and has sex with the TV/TS shemale whore, who 'falls in love' with hubby as they have gay? sex.....i guess husband wasn't so straight?

-the now bi husband with shemale girlfriend (en femme) has run-in with runaway wife (not yet divorced) and the sports star/secret tranny lover.

-the now bi ex-husband gets steadly more femmed step by step by the shemale (and later other TV/TS), until the bi ex-husband goes in full drag en femme, and then he becomes a prostitute who has gay sex with men also....to please his shemale girlfriend!

it is interesting in an insane way, but it is like this has been written by the mad hatter.

Your plot and your writing leave me waiting with anticipation for the next chapter. The picture of you on your profile, makes me see you as Lisa.. and wanting to be with her like no other has.

I was really digging this story till this chapter; all a bit sudden don't you think? Straight, emotional cripple divorcee to swingin CD ass slut in 24 hours? NFW!

Pretty f-cking thin. That, and I can't imagine a cuckold falling for a "woman" who openly tells him she isn't going to stop fucking other men. Nothing says love like sex with anonymous strangers! Again, WTF!?

You totally lost me here; no fucking way.

I dare say, this chapter had me hanging on for dear life, wonderful story so far!

Now all I need is to find MY Dianna, to help me find my inner Lisa!

Looking like a women and now dressing as a women.I spent some time transforming my body in a female one complete with long hair hairless body and now breast 36 d cup.Once fully made up i can pass for a women easy.But once found out that i was not a women i paid the price and then some.My first date raped me stripped most of my clothes tied me from head to toe and used me for hours on end.When he was done his friends took over.I was forced to suck all theirs cocks eat their asses take their cocks deep in my ass and back ass to mouth.made to swallow their loads.And finished the night by all of them filling my belly throat and mouth with all their cum and washed down with loads of piss.They left me stripped tied to the bed for house cleaning to find and they used me the rest of the day