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Click hereWith these words she opened her eyes...and smile into his eyes, for today was not like any ordinary day.
I loved the story My one, I look forward to reading more from you. Happy Birthday My love, I hope W/we can inspire a few ideas of O/our own.
Wow.... Honey just finished the second reading and like you say WOW!!!!!!!
The way you captured the entire moment, the energy, desire, instensity is incredible. Great Job Baby...
Love Ya, SK>>>>>
Wow greenie, I know I told you I loved your story..loved it so much I had to read it again. Hope you post more stories soon.
Hey greenie!!
That story is very hot, completely thought-provoking, and incredibly arousing!! I hope you continue writing more!! Question: where did you find your inspiration for your story?
GEB-Wonderful story and well written. The characters and descriptions made them come to life for me. I hope to see a sequel to this story. I loved it. **Lil Hot**
Green, you are a very sensual writer, please keep working on the rest of this story. Your depiction of her is very real, and he is developing into a very interesting person. Keep up the good story!!!
QuietlyMakingNoise
This was great the night you read it to us and even better the second time!
I just feel like there is more you need to tell me about these two... GET TO WRITTEN !
Very good storyteller...keep writing Jo.
You know how I felt about your story, hon.......I loved it.........Keep writing, maybe do a sequel.
As for you, msboy, let's see something you've written. I would like to scrutinized your work for punctuation and such.
You know how much I loved your story, hon.........It's great.... hugsssssssss
As for you, boy, let's see some of the stuff you've written. And I guarantee, I'll be scrutinizing it with a fine-toothed comb.
Well, stoopid Lit won't let me log on, so this will have to be anonymous :Þ
I'm not big on romance, but your fuck story did make me finger myself. I can only imagine how much you fingered yourself while writing it. That is one of the reasons we write fuck stories. I was glad it wasn't the same generic stuff that I see posted on Lit., and hope you get addicted to writing. I wouldn't worry to much about punctuation right now, that will come as you write more. Content is what makes my slit wet, not commas. You painted a nice picture, great work bitch ö¿ö pammy
This is one of the reasons why I am glad I am on Shay's messenger. She seems to know where to find GREAT stories and authors that know how to tell them.
Keep writing.
Scott
GEB!!! - I absolutely loved it ... intensity, passion, mystery ... such an erotic woman "Kate" is ... speaks volumes about you ...
Two parts I liked best are -
* the way she keeps her cool, polished, manicured, responsible exterior while her passion is barely caged within her ... it has that "ring of truth"
* the focus and joy she feels while pleasing him was VERY well written ... I felt the excitement tingling along in my own body as she felt it ... very hot
Please write more!
kisssssssssssssssssssses
truly, GER - the other Greenie :D
This story was great from the two masterbating scenes to the encounter with the man she lusted after, ending with a hot BJ. I look forward to your next story. Keep up the good work.
Hiya GEB...
OK, seeing as you've already gotten a comment about punctuation, I guess I'm fired as your ad hoc editor... sighs...
I greatly enjoyed this story... as a writer, you show so much passion, and you did a wonderful job telling this story. For a first shot out of the gates, this is indeed "better than expected"
Please keep up the good work, hun.... and next time choose a better editor!!!
-Cummy
Great story hon, i loved it, keep up the good work *huggggggggggggggggggs* very sexy and romantic.
kara.