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Click hereWith these words she opened her eyes...and smile into his eyes, for today was not like any ordinary day.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 19 years agoI loved the story My one, I look forward to reading more from you. Happy Birthday My love, I hope W/we can inspire a few ideas of O/our own.
Anonymousabout 19 years agoWow.... Honey just finished the second reading and like you say WOW!!!!!!!
The way you captured the entire moment, the energy, desire, instensity is incredible. Great Job Baby...
Love Ya, SK>>>>>
asiansilkabout 19 years agoWow greenie, I know I told you I loved your story..loved it so much I had to read it again. Hope you post more stories soon.
jtfresh1about 19 years agoHey greenie!!
That story is very hot, completely thought-provoking, and incredibly arousing!! I hope you continue writing more!! Question: where did you find your inspiration for your story?
Anonymousabout 19 years agoGEB-Wonderful story and well written. The characters and descriptions made them come to life for me. I hope to see a sequel to this story. I loved it. **Lil Hot**
QuietlyMakingNoiseabout 19 years agoGreen, you are a very sensual writer, please keep working on the rest of this story. Your depiction of her is very real, and he is developing into a very interesting person. Keep up the good story!!!
QuietlyMakingNoise
Sweet_Shayabout 19 years agoThis was great the night you read it to us and even better the second time!
I just feel like there is more you need to tell me about these two... GET TO WRITTEN !
Very good storyteller...keep writing Jo.
Jailabout 19 years agoYou know how I felt about your story, hon.......I loved it.........Keep writing, maybe do a sequel.
As for you, msboy, let's see something you've written. I would like to scrutinized your work for punctuation and such.
Anonymousabout 19 years agoYou know how much I loved your story, hon.........It's great.... hugsssssssss
As for you, boy, let's see some of the stuff you've written. And I guarantee, I'll be scrutinizing it with a fine-toothed comb.
Anonymousabout 19 years agoWell, stoopid Lit won't let me log on, so this will have to be anonymous :Þ
I'm not big on romance, but your fuck story did make me finger myself. I can only imagine how much you fingered yourself while writing it. That is one of the reasons we write fuck stories. I was glad it wasn't the same generic stuff that I see posted on Lit., and hope you get addicted to writing. I wouldn't worry to much about punctuation right now, that will come as you write more. Content is what makes my slit wet, not commas. You painted a nice picture, great work bitch ö¿ö pammy
