All Comments on 'Betty's Self Discovery'

See your name ,know we are in for some fun.Well done

Well-written, erotically crafted story. Betty's conflict is well-displayed here, her want and confusion collide very nicely.

I loved your story,very well written and so erotic. Please continue on with this story. I would love to read a story about you doing sketches of the first lady in your story.

Oh my, I loved that story SO MUCH. I'm going to go off and stroke my cock and think of the amazing erotic and arousing and exciting things in your story!

Gary. gearfinkers@hot

Very well written; there was just enough conflict to make the story come alive. Thank you!

I love stories like that and was stroking my cock the whole time I was reading your story. It was so erotic I had to jerk off. Wonderful, wonderful.

You know I always like your stories, Pelios. This was by no means the scarcely occurring exception. Celly

Pelios, like all your stories this is another good one. I agree with the one reader that this story deserves a second chapter. Betty never did get to draw Laura in the nude, maybe even get together with her, then maybe a threesome..

Another well written story with lots of detail. I could almost see myself watching as a fly on the wall.

As others have said, a second chapter is called for

Miranda

I ove the way nancy and betty's arousal made me very aroused too;I would love to watch there women in person.

a great blend of physicality and ambivalent thought processes. nicely paced as well--not too fast, not too slow

Obviously a male fantasy rather than how women might actually behave.

Excellent writing style and very well edited. Really appreciated the unique subject matter and approach. Hot, hot, hot!

Great story. Very erotic. Kept me entertained throughout. Please write some more stories. I showed it to my wife and she loved it! Would love to read about Betty getting to draw Laura and then go down on her.

Great story. One of my favorites. Please write more stories!!!!!

My wife really enjoyed as well.

What a lovely story, so well told. I love the way you share the very realistic inner dialogue - one minute almost prudish, a definite "no" and the next minute hot to trot. I can relate!

Love this! So delicious.

While don't recall it now did give this a well-deserved 5 first read, and now fave too...VERY hot and I love all the women have muffins...!

Looking forward to Ch 02