All Comments on 'Between Fae and Foe Ch. 04'

I have been following this story since it started. I am really enjoying it. I think you need just a little more in each chapter. They seem to be over too quickly. Other than that, it is great. Keep the story going, it has a nice plot to it.

Everything is pretty well written. The story itself is pretty unique and interesting. Other than a few grammatical errors that aren't really important, I find this story really good! I highly enjoy it. Keep up the good work!