All Comments on 'Between the Bars Pt. 01'

...And this was no disappointment. Very hot and with a hook to it... can't wait for more

and of course, this does not disappoint! Looking forward to the remaining installments!

An awesome read, Carson. I love this story and am so glad you posted it. I can't wait to read the rest and catch up. *kisses* -S.

Darling, you're in a category by itself...Oh, this story is coming together so nicely...and I'm hooked. So very hooked!!!

You've been mentioned in the New Story Reviews in the Author's Hangout.

Intriguing characters, hot sex and a hooking storyline. Great job as always!

Keep it coming!

I'm hooked.

Sex, Guns and intrigue.

Great start to what I envision to be a thriller!

Don't even think about stopping the flow of words.

What a wonderfully intriguing start to the story. It's such a welcome change from the porn that proliferates like weeds on so-called erotica sites to read an actual story with character development and gasp! a plot along with hot sexuality. Thanks.

damn, now that is HOT. it was so easy to read that the scenes just materialize in your head.

very well written and very erotic.

thank god you're back, carson!

and the sex wasn't bad, either!!

.... the second time! Should have guessed he was in law enforcement before ;)

Can't wait for the next five.

Hooray for intelligent writing. Loved the sex scenes. I'm a heterosexual female and this was one of the hottest stories I've ever read.

Branching out into your original fic a few weeks ago might have been the best thing I've done for myself in quite some time. Whew...the temperature has gone up about 20 degrees in here...GUH. Love this story. The characters are fun and interesting and real. The plot is clever and believable. Oh did I mention it's HOT.

Your descriptive writing has sucked my right in and I'm off to read part 2 now because the characters feel real and I've got to know what happens next. happier_bunny

Carson, I like your style! Your words sucked me in from the very beginning, the sex was scorching and the intrigue cemented my interest. Fantastic work! :)

Great story, great characters, HOT sex.

This was wonderful! Extremely hot sex scenes with an interesting narrative to boot! Wonderful!

Your writing is steamy carson...the story pulls you in and holds you...the sex hot and erotic. Its great to read an actual story that happens to contain sex

tell me your going to cuntinue. what well happen next common dont leave me like htis dam it. i wish youd cuntinue.

well written, believable, not over the top. the story contains just the right level of detail, has a good storyline, good characters, just the right level of erotic excitement and sex scenes.

Not often do I find myself so absorbed by a story. My husband of 22 years is a Police officer in the city we reside. I have a soft spot for tall sexy blonde Police Officers. Okay, so I have a thing for hot, muscular blonde Cops. This could easily be one of the best I've read in the last year. Hope to see it continue. It's well written has the potential to become one incredble NOVEL.

Wenceslao Pierre

I'm not usually a fan of the 'They meet, they f*** and that's all folks' style of literature. This goes to a whole new level. Thanks for sharing your writing with us. I'll just get a cuppa and settle in to do some catch up!!

This was one of the most erotic chapter i ever read. I came twice reading it. Good story. Good sex. Good work.

Great story! Juicy megasex! I'll grab the later chapters. Fine second-rank romance and mystery novelist balls the balls off a handsome, hot undercover cop whose enemies have him by the balls in a different sense. Will the shy writer become his lover's savior? This one is going to become complicated in the best way.

Omg, let's do this.

XD

On to the next, in luv with it so far!

This is one of the hottest, most incredible story starts I've ever read, and I can't wait to contunue. I love Rylan and Daniel. I want Daniel to be telling the truth and Ry to believe him.

I have to agree and I always thought I had read this... goes to show but am so glad I found it now onto the next chapter

I loved the part about Rylan fucking Daniel with his mind as well as with his body. That's what good erotic writing is all about. And I'm so glad I didn't read this story before all the chapters were there. I think this is my fourth time, and I just had to comment and thank you for a great series.

I love moments like this, when I randomly grab a story for whatever reason and find a fucking gem. This. Is. Fantastic. Incredible. HOT.

And I am so happy to look at your profile page and see so much more writing by you! I will go read it all now.

Ok I'm hooked. the way Daniel talks is so hot! Fucking you with his mind? Damn. I may sound super nerdy, but that is so hot. This story is really interesting, and I can't wait to read on. I guess my only problem with it is the title made it sound like it would be some weird prison butt sex story. I'm really glad it wasn't!

and every time it hooks me in and I can't stop reading. If this was a book, it would be with all my others that I re read a million times Love it!!!

I'm in the process of coming out, and very actively exploring my sexuality. Reading this reminded me of a sexual experience earlier today, and set me off. I've spent so much time over the years fantasizing about sex like this, and now it's odd and exciting to actually have something to compare against the fantasy. The fantasy still wins -- your writing is amazing -- and I intend to continue using the idea of having sex with both the mind and the body, the voice and the flesh. Thank you!

Am really enjoying this, thankyou

Your descriptive writing has to be amongst the best on lit! Really drew me in and imparted a sense of urgency and lust that felt real. The character Rylan feels very real and you have done a good job of bringing him to life. Looking forward to reading the rest and hope the tension and electricity between Daniel and Dylan keeps up and keeping my fingers crossed for a Happily ever after ending, as if this story goes how I think it will they are going to need and deserve one!

This story has been plagiarized on AO3 by an author called Lostboyz under the title, Burned. I've reported it, as this person also targeted one of my stories, in order to get it taken down.

Although normally I don't care for detailed descriptions of sexual intimacy, chapter 1 of this story is so skillfully written that it held my interest from beginning to end. The character and plot development are fresh and enticing. I found myself laughing with pleasure at the choices of words and turns of phrases, especially earlier in the exposition. There is a professional patina to the style and satisfying excellence in the quality of accomplished writing skill. Although it's late and I need to sleep, I just don't want to stop reading. Thank you.

Well, what a twist to that liaison!

Rylan has really caught himself in a dilemma, and he needs to believe Daniel, because how could such a great lover be a murderer.

'Carsonshepherd', you leave us in a state of suspension at the end of your story. But it is really well written and kept us in involved the whole time.

Let's hope Rylan makes the right decision and takes his love to safety, so that justice can be done and crooked cops denounced and brought to trial.

The tension is, but I shall have to wait until tomorrow, as I need to go to bed.

So good I just keep on reading......you are a great story teller

Congratulations on a terrific story! This reader was drawn in and completely engrossed in the characters and story. It's well-written and the tone is perfect. Looking forward to reading Pt. 02.

The dirty talk in the cab was super hot!!!!

Holy shit, this is one of the most viscerally sexy stories I've ever read. I'm a straight woman, but my god, you've got me wishing I weren't either one.

You'd think, on a site of erotic stories, there would be more characters getting off from words. Excellent hot dirty talk, there.