All Comments on 'Beyond the Pool'

I love your writing style. This one was even better than the one that started the series. Keep up the great work!

Very hot and very well written... thanks for sharing...

Cant wait til she returns to collect the underware

the lovemaking rocks my boat,and the young girl feeling good from the older man says a lot about experiment.

Keep it going! There is the beginning of a truly great relationship building between these two...

This is one hot sexy story and a dream cum true! Need at least one more chapter!

So hot and sensual and realistic all at the same time. I really liked your style of writing and can't wait to read more of it.

Very sexy and well written. Please continue the series.

Wow- if this guy was my neighbor I would have to visit him everyday...love love love this story!