All Comments on 'Bi Cycle'

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oldmanbill69oldmanbill69over 2 years ago

Great little fun story!

Br0kenD0llBr0kenD0llover 2 years ago

Though I'm sure it's not actually true, I blame this story (along with Bookworm) for my impregnation fetish. Thank you for writing it.

Omart57Omart57over 3 years ago
Loved it

great story, K.! Fun and sexy, all the way.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Liked it

That thinking was out of the box. Loved the twist

julianmarquezjulianmarquezover 3 years ago

I actually found the story amusing on top of sexy. Wonder what would have happened if Jeremy actually stuck around.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Very nice

Enjoyable short story. I like the “twist” ending. Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
You done did it good.

My mom is an English teacher and judging by her standards, that is my assessment.

Lejeau

KrosisKrosisover 9 years agoAuthor

Male fantasy, yes. Clueless, sure. I did not mean it to be insulting. But poorly written? Are you an English teacher?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Idiotic

Another poorly written male fantasy. Clueless and insulting. Makes me glad to be a lesbian.

Lowest rating possible.

stansteadstansteadover 9 years ago
That was fun!

Nice to meet some open-minded lesbians. Usually they are such bores.

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