by Lady_Fiona
All that I can say is that this story certainly spoke volumes to my particular fantasies.
This short story could have been written by my lover or myself. Very close to our relationship.
Amazing story, and well written! You brought the nuances of your characters' relationship to life through their dialogue and thoughts. Even I wanted a cup of coffee after reading that...and possibly a cigarette :)
No doubt about it, you're loaded with talent and I can't wait to read the rest of your stories!