by Lady_Fiona
No doubt about it, you're loaded with talent and I can't wait to read the rest of your stories!
Amazing story, and well written! You brought the nuances of your characters' relationship to life through their dialogue and thoughts. Even I wanted a cup of coffee after reading that...and possibly a cigarette :)
This short story could have been written by my lover or myself. Very close to our relationship.
All that I can say is that this story certainly spoke volumes to my particular fantasies.