by bbwlove_it
This was the greatest story I've read in my life, It kept me guessing the whole time... Please continue to write, your very talented and gifted.
Great descriptions, very sensual. Any dialogue, ass worshipping, or anal in the future?
If you are to have a second chapter you should've made more of a buildup, but it's different to your other stories that I just read. You are good, don't stop writing.