by polyman
The first (4) Chapters were GREAT and very exciting with a great story line....I, personally, could have done without this chapter. I hope that your future chapters will show more of how Taryn is made to "perform" and be daring in front of others, for her master. That pair and Rosanna are very exciting!!!!
the mother,daughter and the father will be the slaves of the son.the son will be master of the house.
what they said^^^^^^ except for bringing the father into the mix....
This series was turning into one of the hottest stories this site has hosted in a long time. The other parts rank up there with some of the best I have read here over the years. Please get back to the other 3 main characters. They are far more interesting.
...with the previous ratings for this chapter - I found this a very truthful account of a submissive's need for domination - presumably Richard will now find what he needs at home - this is a great series, please keep writing!
Frankly, if someone came at me like she did, trying to dominate me, I'd break her arms. What she did was basically assault and battery. Granted, this is just a story and we're getting a good hint (hint? try two by four) as to what makes Richard tick.
I like domme stories but downright abuse is not my bag, whether it's giving or taking.
hmm cant realy understand why you would trow a chapter like this in this story
i was reading it becouze it realy did exited me but this chapter is a complete 180
and it does not realy compute with the rest of the story
and besides for my self is a person were to tell me to jump i would sit down out of spite or lack of respect for authority or whatever you wanna call it but i could never see my self in this man
so thats why i think it so strange to trow in this chapter!
Honestly really, forget all the negative comments they wouldn’t even know if a dick was up their arse let alone a good story. If they continue on with the rest of the story they will see how this chapter fits in with the story. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
This chapter is not my cup of tea but I get how it is important for context in this overall story well done again.