by polyman
a little less sexual, but more touching giving a "real" feeling to it. i know others will complain about this but i think it was a good avenue at this point. looking forward to te next chapter
Hopefully there's more to come.... and that its nowhere near finished...
not as good as the rest but still better than ch.5
THIS IS THE BEST STORY IV READ IN FOUR YEARS. I LOVE TO GIVE IT A 20 IF I COULD.. YOU HAVE KEEP ME LOOKING FOR EACH AND EVERY POSTING THAT YOU HAVE PUT HERE. DONT LISTIN TO THE JUNK SOME SAY.. YOU ARE ONE OF THE BEST!! PLEASE KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK I LOVE IT... THANKS
Wanting a lover of mine to have sex with another man. Even if it's just a blowjob.
and off-track. I know the story is getting stale, and the author is trying to get some new spice for the story, but please don't make it become a freak. Don't make the protagonists become a perv. Simply end the story and try a new one.
write your story and don't change a thing.make the other woman a slave too.watch out for disease when giving head to others.keep it in the family.no other men,but the woman at the place where his mom work is game.
This story really gets better and better with every chapter... it's easy to see that you're trying to spice the whole thing up in this chapter, but you're actually so good at it that I don mind! I luvit! Keep going!
The waiter scene was just really gross. Why let his women touch other men at all? What's the point having slaves then?
1 star for ordering Cat to give the waiter a BJ. As a Dom and Master, I do not order my sub or slave to perform sexual acts on others. Some D/s & M/s are poly, but it's not safe. I know too many subs that have gotten STD's like that. (Oral gonorrhea & herpes.) Plus, I don't share my play toys.
That's an unknown person she was slobbing the knob with... Save the good stuff for a person you would trust. A hand job watching a sexual act should have been enough. Her talking in his ear, may be biting on the ear.
Fuck!!!!!
What a stupid, stupid chapter, this just gets worse.
He does does NOT care about them, he just cares about his own perverted teenage like pleasures.
He is entirely unsuited to be a master of unything and his mother and sister are equally stupid to put themselves at risk for his juvenile wishes and pleasures.
Scores 1;5
Such a caring master who exposes his sister to Sexually Transmitted Diseases from strangers, not clever, not smart.
Owen is not a Masters asshole.
Again 1/5