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All Comments on 'Bill's Pet'

by carl_a

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
spelling and grammar

Loved the story premise, but you need an editor. I hope you get one and continue the story

jkimjkimover 12 years ago
hope

i hope this is more than a short story. very hottttttttttt.

NaughtyMareNaughtyMareover 12 years ago
Where's the rest?!

I love it!! So HOT!! you should continue. You left me wanting more!! Really good!

bandogirl09bandogirl09over 2 years ago

Love!!!! Keep going !!!

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

I feel dirty just reading it, it was absolutely wonderful to get lost in your writing :)

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