All Comments on 'Birth of a Killer'

well, as a fan of the Jack The Ripper lore myself, I enjoyed it..Never heard of it being put that way before..Refreshing to say the least.. please keep up the good work..

Blessed Be

Dru

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I am largely fascinated by stories of Jack the Ripper, and this was beautifully written. A very unique aspect of him not many people would care to venture into. Keep writing. You've got a great talent for it.

I loved your story. It was nicely written. Im a picky person & I still liked it. so well done. As far as advice tho...This is a website which people go to to read things that get them off. I enjoy a good read whether it's about sex or not...but on this site, it's about sex. I think U need to only put stories on here that are filled with sexual scenes. Ur story took too long and then when u FINALLY reach the end he does nothing more than masturbate before killing her. It was disappointing really. I wanted to get off to it and I didnt. So yea, ur a good writer. Nice story. But not for this website.