All Comments on 'Birthday Gift'

horrible grammer skills and what was up with the mumbo jumbo? read the dictionary next time and then take another shot at it

i liked how you reverted back to your native language. it made some sort of excitement. but some people preferably americans will not understand this. improve on some grammar skills too then try again for a better score.

Yaar chalegi par tu apni english aur grammer par thoda dhyan de baki to maza aaya teri story padne main. aur likhna par ab dost thodi english ki madad lena. Thik hai chal ok bye Par aaya Maza ha Vapas likhna

not she,

who was given the gift on her birthday.