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sandymonroesandymonroeabout 10 years ago

The sex was hot. You could have described Paula in a few lines at the beginning: her looks and more importantly, her soul and her former adventures to know her past.

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Kinky imagination and keen on improving my writing. Love descriptive stories - usually around wife sharing and group activities, up for most things :) Been away for years, and now just returning, updated profile with Mrs.