by m_storyman_x
What was the address of that restaurant?
I haven't read a story for some time that moved at a pace along with the story line like this one.
Well presented.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Yeah! I would like the address of that restaurant also! Since you twisted my arm yes, I would like to know more about these folks! More please! As many chapters as you would like to share.
Cheers
SAGE
Your stories all have a common problem in that your paragraphs are too long which makes the story too difficult to read easily.
They may be good, but I can't focus on them for that reason.