All Comments on 'Birthday Present Pt. 01'

well written story, kinky enough for anyone, but more than a bunch of nasty words thrown together, keep it up, cant wait to see where they go from here.

Thank you for taking your time to write such a lovely tale of erotica.

For your first story, you set a very high standard. I look forward to reading more. Worthy of the praise it has received. One of the best stories I've read on this site.

One of the best and kinkiest feminised husband stories ever!

Wow, that was quite a first submission to Literotica! I don't imagine that's your first story ever so PLEASE submit some of your others. I'm sure we'll enjoy them too.

While I'm not typically into S/M, I loved this story. I really enjoyed seeing the characters change and the sex was HOT! I can't wait to see other things you write!

I love this story, because it has an element that I find irrestible. The element is that the central character is drawn, almost against his/her will, into changing his/her own personality. In this story, the attraction of the sexual excitement of being a male transexual draws the hero to become more and more feminine, becoming more and more blatantly sexual in his behavior, and more and more submissive to the dominant heroine. Finally, at the end he has become someone markedly different than he began. I love this. Please keep writing these types of stories.

One of the best stories I've read on Literotica!

The best I ever read on Literotica! and I haven´t even finished yet!!!

Incredibly hot! I was hard as a rock from page 1 all the way to the end. I must have leaked a cup of pre-cum, and would have climaxed except I want to save THAT for when my wife gets home ... SOON!! What a delightful tale. Thank you so much for writing it.

I loved this story, Im not into f/m usually but the girlie bits were good,any chance you could pass on the address of Jennies shop.Luv Jenny Cook

That was the best thing I have ever read i would love it to happen to me

This story had me hard from start to finish. I'm jealous of Victoria and envious of her life. I hope she's still dressing or went further in her discovery of who she could be. All the best to all parties concerned.

-sasha-

Just noticed there are more chapters to this story ....absolutely have to continue reading. I will post again on the last chapter.

I am a strait guy and this story made my body twitch more times than I can remember. Wish I had a Donna in my life.

That would take a lot of trust. My wife would throw me out of the house. Moving onto Pt. 2.

Thank you for your story. One of the best written of erotic content that I've ever read. I jerked off three times and my panties remained wet. Thanks!

Good story. I rnjoyed the wife taking charge, could have had more sex. Enjoyed the secretary.

You'e Penned My Perfect Dream!

Upon Reading This My Heart Was Racing Wishing It Were Me!!

I'm Still Shaking While Typing This!!

Read All 6 Chapters More Than Once!!

Still Unforgettable, WOW!

the hottest story i've red in along time. it will keep me getting me hard thinking of it foralong time... keep it up your good...

Fantastic story. You capture all of the feelings and sensations that I have when I slip on my panties and stockings. I am progressing at a much slower rate though. The bit were Vickie wants to wear socks over her stockings made me laugh out loud. That's exactly what I do. I would love to turn into a fully fledged Miss Vickie. In the meantime thank you for alllowing me to fantasise about my own feminine development through your fabulous, brilliantly observed story. Excellent stuff.

Kindest Regards,

Ricky

xxx

I'm not sure about the b&d, but the feminization and cross dressing would be a great present. I loved this story. I really identify with the characters. I wish my wife would do this to me. Thank you for a very enjoyable read.

Excellent starting chapter! You took your time, delved very deep, and built a fantastic start to a story. I'm itching to read the next installment, and am filled with anticipation as to where this story will go and how far Donna will take Vic, as well as how far Donna will take herself.

I am dressed up in a pretty light pink dress with a couple of small flowers on it, my pink panties and bra, with inserts. I am also a very lucky crossdresser in that my wife knows and supports me, unfortunatly because of her medical condition no sex for a long time, mostly my fault as I just can not bring myself to try, as everytime I touch her in someway, she complains it hurts, she has fibromyalgia, along with back problems and neck problems from a car accident a couple years ago. Great start I hope there is more to come from you so we can follow along, and see how it progresses, I am not much into the pain or spanking, but the rest is good. More Please.

Fabulous story! I'm so jealous of Vickie.

I have always dreamed of something like that happening to me but it never eventuates. Perhaps I might be fortunate enough to be the phylis in the story as I'm getting close to the use by date

This story is just how I have always imagined my life partner to be with me, I am soo jelous!! Its taken me 3days to read this as I'm on my mobile phone and work 12 hours a day :( bt it was worth it!!!! I can't wait to read part 2 :D

just love that he fell in to the transformation so well .. is he going all the way I love to read more of this story but pls treat him well .. yours lann MAWH XXX

how did Janine work out? thank you for the story, loved it

I really enjoyed it. Thank you for the fantasy and I WILL BE USING THE VISION OF IT FOR A LONG TIME TO COME.

What a great story, it could be my fantasy (oh no, it is.... :-))

what else can I say. I am curious how many female readers have read this story. It would show a number of things about the public. The one time that the husband said no, the wife was taken back, sad and hurt, feeling that she had hurt her husband, and their marriage. That was a telling few sentences that told of the love they actually had between them. There should have been more communication between them, but there wasn't. Was that good or bad, who can say. They seemingly still love each other, but seems to be getting out of hand, without communication, which they still haven't had. I loved the story, and wish it had happened to me, at least to some extent. The more you include into the mix the more you risk. What draws people together is the closeness, and if you start to make it public, then its no longer close. It's no longer intimate.

WOW, suck a wickedly erotic srory. Now, how can I find a Mistress to take control of a sissy panty boy???

How beautifully written, oh my god how sexy I felt when I read your increasingly erotic fantasy in words ! I just felt so drawn in by your writing

Simply put I would've just came all over played with myself if I wasn't at work, but when I get home Into the shower I'll go to play with myself I can't wait till I have my own place again, so I can start dressing up with the sexiest lingerie, heels & dresses I can buy , just to pamper myself

such a beautiful Story. I wish my wife had done that 53 years ago. She tried but I was too much of a pussy to let her.

Many years ago I had a GF/Mistress that made a half hearted and vague attempt at this with me. I think that had she been more like this Miss Donna, I'd probably still be with her. As it is, I really wish my husband would do this with me, but again thus far it's only been half hearted and unsatisfying. But this is an incredibly well written story and it's giving me quite the vicarious thrill. Very good job indeed.

Your writing is wonderful. I started reading this story and got aroused immediately. I had to stop and get fully dressed because I was only wearing a simple bra and panties under my drab attire when I started. I had to fully dress from head to toe before finishing to truely appreciate and enjoy this story. I can't wait to read the next chapters. This story has been my strongest fantasy for 25+ years because I wish I was Vic/Miss Vicky/Victoria and my wife was Miss Donna. We are actually more like the older couple in the restaurant, she knows I dress but will not participate. Maybe I'll have her read your magnificent story and .....

I so wish

Well written story, interesting, erotic and for the most part, enjoyable.

When I say “for the most part” the cross dressing was fun and it seemed to enhance their sex lives. They both enjoyed the consensual erotic experience.

However, what spoilt it for me was the fact that Donna couldn’t keep her mouth shut. Within 48hrs she had told, a woman she barely knew, another woman she had never met before & a sex shop worker. She had sex with 2 of them. What happened to the “this is just between us” comments at the start of the story. This will end in tears.

I really, really like to fantasize about being feminized by my wife. She does bits of some of the scenes, such as you write about.

I'm amazed at your long leisurely tale. Seven chapters of tantalizing details, and gradual unfolding of the sexual drama. I loved how the hubby, got into the routine with only the tiniest bit of reluctance.

Very erotic and stimulating stuff for a lifetime crossdresser, with a peach of a sweet, loving, understanding spouse.

xoxo Linda Sheer

Fantastic, one of my faves on Literotica, arousing all the way through, now rushing onto part 2

I would really like to feminize a man to be my lesbian lover - soft, cuddly, attentive, passionate.

I love your long leisurely story telling. I cannot wait to read all your stories.

You are a great story teller.

tedu

If this is the first part, wow, I can't wait for the rest. Very erotic. And very well written from a story perspective. Unlike other stories that use the 'his and her thoughts', the same ground wasn't covered, but rather new ideas exposed and how they came to the author's mind. Quite compelling, even riveting, waiting for the next erotic game play. And I especially preferred the lack of intentional humiliation, but with just a little that was part of the fun and not meant to truly demean.

It did not take my wife long to finish feminizing me after a year of whoremones.Now with a female body and size 36d breasts she set about fully dressing me and doing my hair and make up.I must say when all done i could pass easy enough.She said she now has a surprise for me as i came down stairs there sat a nice looking tall black man.He took me by the hand walked me to the bed room took off my dress and thong pushed me down to my knees and pushed his cock down my throat.All the time my wife filmed the whole thing.Now my wife was now bent over the end of the bed with a big black cock deep in her ass.We both were now on film taking black cocks in all our holes filling them with loads of cum

This is the sweetest and most lovely femminizing story I read for a long time, maybe ever.

I enjoy the setup, Vicie in a mostly femme universe. And with Jenny and Gail it's both Vic and Donna who are exploring and trying themselves in new situations.

Great story telling too.

Thanks for sharing this tale.

I read this over several days. It inspired me to crossdress and I went to Goodwill and bought a red No Boundaries One Piece bathing suit. It feels wonderful. I had to put on a maxipad so as not to stain it. The details of the clothing and consensual sex were extremely well written. Venturing out fully feminized is the ultimate turn on to all crossdressers. Any way You can use my female name if you want to. It is Joyce and I am a submissive. Thank you and I am going to read all of your stories.

Loved your story very much . I’ll probably read it again

OMG page 1 is enough to make my hands stop abusing myself. LOL Very well written

This has been such a fun story to read. I can’t wait to start part 2

loved it, but you shoul have gotten him a male lover while youhad lesbian fun.