All Comments on 'Birthday Surprise Ch. 01'

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26thNC26thNCalmost 4 years ago

Simple minded, poorly written, whore wife and cuck garbage.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Toys and cheaters run amok

And not in a good way.

x_witless_xx_witless_xalmost 11 years ago
Not in my genre. A little too fucking simplistic.

thanks. 2*

LickideesplitLickideesplitalmost 11 years ago
Get a real life

Life is just a bowl of (deflowered) cherries! And cucumbers!

2*

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Is this what you guys think about while you work at McDonalds all day?

You just returned from offshore? Is that your mom's basement?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
nice to see

people who are slow getting along with each other you fucking loser.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Just move along, folks!

Nothing to see here! This story was dead on arrival. No plot, no eroticism, no interesting characters.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Too late for a brain transplant.

This kind of story results from a person born with a missing brain.

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