All Comments on 'Birthday to Remember'

Very well written, an interesting plot, really hot and everything.

But why Mind Control?

This was an amazing story. I agree that the category should be something like BDSM or Loving Wives or Erotic Coupling.

Perhaps you chose Mind Control becuase she was being controlled? (And it doesn't quite fit the nonconsent/reluctance theme since she was enjoying it all the way?)

In any case, this was a wonderful story and a beautiful gift of love from a husband to his adoring wife.

May you write many more like this!

Ms. Honeydip - Midwest USA

I'm not much of a BDSM fan, hate anal, but DAMN this story was hot! I wanted to fuck the poor girl by the end of the first page and was insane with lust by page 3.

The route was gratifyingly hot...

okay... this story is AMAZING!!!!

it made me cum so hard i swear i squirted.... oh my GOD.

Well written, great topic, and lovingly offered. Enjoyed the story. Gives me ideas for my own.

Fantastic story! Thanks for getting me all wet. ;)

Great story, great read, thanks so much gives all some ideas for the future