by christian_hm
i liked the story and see potential for more. but i did notice that everyone was just about the same in length. i think it would be nice to see a lil more variety in sizes.
Loved it. Makes me want my own alien adventure... ;)
As for the guy giving it a zero and stating that it was gay... Read the title next time. :)
I liked it, but for me it seemed to break up the flow by saying "Christian did x" and the like. Seems like using pronouns(like him) instead of restating his name would make it better.
Just my two cents.
That must have been quite a sight: green skin with a red/white tartan miniskirt!