All Comments on 'Bitten Ch. 01'

I really love your story, but there is a "typo" early in the story that says the ceremony happens when a girl turns 16- a big no-no on this site. I would hate for your story to be blocked just because of this. Please change it so the rest of your story can be told as well! Keep up the excellent work! I will be waiting to read more. : )

It doesn't say it happens it a sixteen it says eighteen but that the party is the equivalent of a sweet sixteen party.

Very good. Looking forward to more.

I have never read a story quite like this.

Please update this as frequently as possible. ;)

It is a great read.

outstanding!!!! Am I correct to assume this will be a cyberpunk kinda story?

I also want to know if its possible to get a picture of your vamps cos my imagination is supplying a very hilarious pic!!!!!!!!

I have to agree with everyone and ask that you keep frequent with this story. I was so into this story, defiantly disspointed when it ended.

Thank you all for your kind words and encouragement. Chapter 2 is currently in the editing phase so I hope to get it up soon.

It was originally written as a "sweet 16" but due to publishing standards it got shifted to the legal age of consent in the US which happens to be 18.

liked your version of the vampires and werewolves.It was refreshing. I liked the main character as well. hope to see more. very well written.

It may turn out to be too dark for me but I'm intrigued enough to at least try the next ch.. I'll be back for Chapter 2. Thanks for writing.

Chapter two has been submitted and should go live in the next day or so. Keep on the look out for it.

Thanks again for all the kind words and encouragement.

THanK YoU

Looking foward to the next, and on a humoress note. The commenter before me Holly shit, haha, oh I know accident typo but it made me laugh, Thank you dude, loved it. Just saw it and was like huh????? Rock on

Can't wait for the next chapter

Great writing .Can't wait for more !