All Comments on 'Bitten Ch. 08'

by darkpheonix

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manimawmanimawover 10 years ago

why isnt she telling her wats d matter actually.....????

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
She should tell her!

Maybe the werewolves know how to fix what is wrong with Lina. Or... maybe Damion has to cum in her to fix her? (If he never did before.) I hope this gets solved for her. Or... is Lina going to have sex with a human? Preferably a human of average size. >.>

Faithful reader - 123udontknowme

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Thank u for the quick up dates....love this story. I don't think she should tell her best friend what happened until after she is cured....it would cause a problem in their friendship

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Read the prologue

I'm enjoying the story. But what other commenters seem to be failing to realize is that all this is in the past. She is currently locked in a padded cell. Why? I'm sure we will find out, but what is it in her life that at the moment seems to be improving that goes so wrong that she has to be locked up as some kind of lab rat??

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Happy!

Love what you have done so far! I hope you keep writing to let us know what happens next!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
I have one little problem....

So her best friend raped her, and she continues to go on with life, living next door and sharing a bed with this girl. She is afraid of sex and intimacy of any kind, but displays no anger or blame on her friend. I know this is a story based on fantasy, but that just bothers me. She is even afraid to tell her friend that she is scarred because of the rape....Am I the ONLY one with a problem with this? I love the story, but that fact makes my eye twitch.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

You must come out with another chapteror two this story line is just absolutely amazing it gives me so much life. I would love to see the rest of their journey as their characters evolve.

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