All Comments on 'Black Couple's Strapon Nights'

Why did you capitolize black throughout the story? Racist. And have you ever heard of quotation marks? They are this great invention used to write dialogue. Aw, poor Sammy never did learn to write, did he?...Poor guy...

zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Always has... poor little boy...

You have to give Sammy boy his due. He never gives up --- unfortunately!!

... did you ever notice that this very poor writer gets more comments than most of his betters?

That's on you.

Snap out of it. Set your phasers on "Ignore" and get on with life.

Now if you would only learn how to write.